In Class Writing (Close Reading on Page 60)

In this passage, there is a big conflict between M. Bienconnu and Desiree. Both have different belifes about what Desiree’s future is, and it can be clearly seen in the language. For example, M. Bienconnu uses a strong metaphor when talking to Ti Moune about setting realistic expectations for herself: “To be tranquil, one must hang one’s hat where one can reach it. Keep one’s heart where one can feel its beat.” (60)  M. Bienconnu uses this strong metaphor in hopes to make Desiree understand that Daniel is out of her league due to his social class. When she goes on to question this, he uses another metaphor, saying that fate is cast in stone. In a literal sense, when something is engraved in stone, it is unable to be changed. So, when he says that fate is the thing cast into stone, he is saying that there is no way in which she will be able to be with Daniel. This language also allows the reader to get a sense of who his character is, his tone is calm (mostly achieved by the use of his metaphors) and because of his straightforward and honest conversation, it can be assumed that he is very wise. However, Ti Moune contrasts him due to her sharp, to-the-point, stubborn replies shows her youth, as she has not experienced any harsh reality- thus showing that she lives mostly in day dreams. She constantly sticks to her beliefs that she and Daniel will end up together, whereas M. Bienconnu is more realistic.